Rewrite the Above-the-Fold Section
Rewrite a page's first screen so a new visitor understands what it is, who it's for, and what to do in five seconds.
The Prompt
Rewrite the above-the-fold section of [page] for [audience]. Current copy: [current copy]. The first screen must say what the product is, who it's for, and the next step, in under 30 words in total, excluding the button. Give three versions: one outcome-led, one problem-led, and one proof-led. For each, write the headline, subheadline, button text, and one line on the visual it needs.
How to use this effectively
- Paste your real current copy so the rewrite has something concrete to improve on.
- Ask for three distinct angles — outcome, problem, proof — not three versions of the same headline.
- Keep the total word count under 30 words excluding the button; that constraint is what forces clarity.
Put this prompt to work
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